red-sorceress's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fat Fat Horse]

I love puzzle platformers, and this one was surprisingly fun! I think the fetish element was subtle enough for a broad audience. Please make more games!

[The Grand Grimoire Chronicles - Episode 3]

I have been playing your adventure games, and I love them! I know you are good about fixing bugs, but might I also suggest working on the grammar? I think it would really elevate the game if the intro was more solid. I wrote out the first part and got rid of some redundant phrases and minor errors.

Whilst scouring a newspaper from the north west of Scotland, I came across the headline "The Curse of Brookrath Isle Strikes Again". At first, it appeared to be nothing more than a sensationalist headline. However, the contents of the article held some disturbing truths. Some local children had gone missing, and it is implied that they went to the island to test out a myth. It is said that anyone who spends the night on the islands will suffer the "curse of Brookrath" and die.

JeffreyDriver responds:

Thanks. I'm glad you like the game. I'm not much of a writer. If I could use your intro I'd be happy to credit you.

[Lovu Lovu Blast - Xmas Castle PUBLIC]

I would love to see an expanded version of this game! It's cute and fun!

Dezue responds:

Heyho, red-sorceress!

Thanks a lot, glad you enjoyed the game!
I'll expand the gameplay a little bit according to the feedback I've gotten, and I also want to put in some more lewds of the princesses :)
Merry christmas and stay funky!
Dez

[Broken TV: Video Puzzle]

would be more fun for me if I did not have motion sickness 😅

[Ducklings]

I don't know how this is "relaxing". I got so stressed out seeing the lonely ducklings crying in open water. I used to live on a lake where ducklings would get snapped up by alligators, so I guess this reminds me of that.

[GE Catgirls Demo]

It has potential. It was strange to play with no music or sound effects. I can also tell you were avoiding drawing hands on the still images, but you can do it with some practice!

[OVERGAME]

it took me a few tries to get through the game due to some bugs, but I am glad I got there! Cool concept.

[counting sheep]

I counted 11 sheep :-)

[Witch Trials]

There were a handful of grammar issues. I only point that out because you want to make "high quality" games. I think you have a lot of potential!

[I can jump]

It was comical to watch the character die from a saw wound while beautiful piano music played in the background. 😂